“Is your writing flabby or fit?” That’s the question The Writer’s Diet asks, and it gives you immediate feedback on your writing, showing you where you have excessive verbs, prepositions, and adverbs (among other things).
I found The Writer’s Diet via MetaFilter, one of my all time favorite websites. I’ve been introduced to hundreds of news stories, photographers, artists, singers, ideas, and interesting individuals I would never have discovered otherwise. This is just the latest. From the metafilter post: “The WritersDiet Test, created by Dr. Helen Sword, allows you to enter a writing sample of 100 to 1000 words and have it graded from “lean” to “heart attack” on its level of excess verbiage.” Well, of course I wanted to find out where my writing fell.
Since I wasn’t on the computer with my current WIP, I entered in the text of one of my more storytelling posts on my other blog, Blessed by Holy Water in Tallinn. The results? My overall score was “Fit and Trim,” with everything except the verbs coming in at lean. My verbs, though, evidently need toning. The site also highlights each of the instances within your text, so you can see where you might look into editing your content. I can see each and every instance I used be, is, are, were, am, and was. Very interesting, indeed. You can also download a full diagnosis, which includes suggestions for improvement.
I definitely wanted to see what came up with my current WIP, so I switched computers and copied in the first chapter. My results:
So what about this post? “Fit and Trim,” although my verbs still need toning (but, it counted the 6 instances I used it in the paragraph above as examples, so I think I should get a break on that!).
Try out The Writer’s Diet and let me know what you think of the site. Do you think it’s useful? Where did your writing sample fall on the health chart?